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Friday, September 6, 2013

Nikita James

She is a small Russian Sprout who refuses to grow until she defines her name.
Planted by the gardeners Arvell Sr. and (Kee-Kee) Shekita Renea,
She is (Nee-Nee) Nikita Moneē!

A unique, unidentified, flower of the indian routes.
She IS Earth!
We just don't know it.
And the smallest things could liven her up,
Yet, she stands alone.
Her wisdom fulfils the tongue of the hungriest souls.
Take everything she says and feed it to the worthy.
We shall not forget to never bite the hand that feeds us

She breathes desire.
Her air is beginning to fade.
She's very soft spoken with a loud appearance.

Her pollen will affect the world.
Singing her story of strength,
She WILL rise...
And breed a whole new meaning to the title Victorious!

One by One she pollinates the people who's breathe made her alive.

A once dying flower was penetrated with acid rain...
A live drop fell and awoken her.
No longer does her shy kidnap her and hold her for ransom.
She IS Nike!

18 comments:

  1. I like all of your sayings and phrases that you used to describe your name c:

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  2. I like how it was poem that had many symbols that made us think

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  3. I think your poem was Omazing x3 you had great words to use. :D

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  4. I just loved your writing style, so much. Your poem is amazing.

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  5. That was so amazing!!!! I loved how symbolic the whole thing was! You're poem was beautiful! Great job!

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  6. Nikita, fantastic job! I love the symbolism in your writing. Also, excellent use of third person. Very creative.

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  7. I like your poem because it was really deep!

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  8. I liked the way that you worded your poem, it made it feel like you would be talking really fast, but it was just the worded. I really liked this.

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  9. I think your poem was good c: you used a lot of good words in it :D

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  10. I like that you gave us all the image that you where this flower that is blooming and helping everyone bloom with you as you grow.

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  11. Nice prom and grat use of simales and presonafca

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  12. Nikita you are a really good poet. I really like all the symbols for your name.

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  13. What did you mean by "she is earth! We just don't know it. "

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  14. You did very good ! This poem was very personal of how you felt about yourself. She is Nike! ? I did not understand that.

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  15. i like how symbolic your poem is, good job.

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  16. In terms of everyone's question or confusion, I have to clarify the poem. This is very symbolic in many ways.

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